Walker Tale # 11 Grandpa Tells a Story

Walker helped the other older children collect the dishes and wash them up with heated water on the campfire. They left them upside down on a board to dry. Sophia played a game of hide and seek with the other children in the moonlight. When the dishes were done everyone came back to the fire-ring where the sacred fire crackled.

With a twinkle in his eye, Grandpa said,

“Knock knock.”

“Who’s there?” they all replied.

“Who.”

“Who who?”

He looked around. “Do I hear an owl?”

They hooted in laughter. Then Grandpa said to the teens, “Abigail and Josiah, you built the fire-ring tonight. It’s strong and secure. Best one yet. Well done.”

Betsy said, “Tell us a story, Grandpa.”

“All right. Let’s see. Once there was a stone named Rocky. He sat like a lump in the road all by himself. He said to himself, “I am really lonely and bored.”

Abigail interrupted and said, “Grandpa, I thought you said he was a rock, not lumber.”

Grandpa smiled and shook his finger at her in a pretend scolding. “I said ‘he was bored’, not ‘he was a board’.”

He continued. “So, there he was, bored. Wishing he had family. Along comes a girl who really liked building with rocks. She collected a pile by the lonely stone and cleared the sand off a flat part of ledge. She began to make a wall on the foundation. She made four walls. She built up tall sides. She even found a way to make a roof of stones. Then she went home to her supper.

“That night Rocky made friends with Mica, Schist, Bowlda, Igney, Meta, Sedi and many more, nestled close together. They became a family. The girl came back and put a lantern among them so they served as a guidepost on the trail for people on a journey. The end.

He continued, “The King is building all his people into a temple made of stones. Whenever we gather together we share the stories of the things he does to protect, guide, and feed us. The light drew us to him and lights our way.” said Grandpa.

“With bread and wine we remember how he freed us from slavery.” He took a warm biscuit, pinched off a small piece for himself and passed it around. Each did the same and held it, gazing into the fire or looking up at the moon. When they each had a piece, they raised their bread to the starry sky and said, “We remember the King who died to free us.” They ate together.

Then Grandpa poured wine into a cup and took a sip. They each sipped and wiped the edge with the clean cloth that came with it. He passed the cup to his right and it went around the ring. When it returned to him he held it up and they said, together,  “We remember the King who rose again and is alive forever!”

Grandpa said, “Remember, we are all living stones shaped by his hands into a house that will last. Sleep well.”  Grandma got up and stretched and Betsy yawned.

Walker was thinking how good it felt to be full and safe with others around him. He felt something nudging him over and over and realized he has nearly fallen asleep right as he sat and that Sophia was poking him rather painfully in his shoulder.

“Ow! What?!” he said

“Walker! Say the riddle!”

“Seek the burning embers where 
the living waters run;
A house of stone remembers there 
the death of the Living One.”

“Oh oh oh!!” he shouted. “It’s here! It’s right here!”

Priscilla ran to his side. “What is here? Is it a snake? What’s the matter?”

Walker then told the rest of his story. How he came through the town of Cold River. How they were in danger of the Wolf’s army because their sacred fire was cold. How he volunteered to ask the king to send a hero to bring back sacred fire. And that he was given a riddle.

“The riddle is ‘Seek the burning embers…’” He pointed to the fire. “Right there! ‘Where the living waters run…’ The living waters ran when we were talking about the King! ‘A house of stone…’ Just like Grandpa said, we’re the house of stone. ‘…remembers there the death of the Living one.’ The King is the Living One and we did that with the bread and cup!”

“But,” he sat down slowly. “How do I get the fire to them? What am I supposed to do?”

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Walker Tale #10 Water in a Weary Land

Walker and Sophia were out of water. They sat in the trail in the dusk and they were thirsty. Walker realized his mind was saying over and over, “…where the living waters run.” Wearily he recited the whole riddle:

“Seek the burning embers 
Where the living waters run.
A house of stone remembers there 
The death of the Living One.”

Sophia was too tired to comment. The full moon rose above the low hills. It gave enough light to see the path clearly, so they got heavily to their feet to walk a little longer. The air was cooling quickly. Soon it would be chilly. No shelter was in sight.

They climbed a rise and gasped in surprise when they saw moving lights down in the plain below.  They quickened their steps. Soon they arrived at a green bowl in the dry land. They had found an oasis. A small stream flowed over a rock shelf into a clear pool. One tree was planted by the water, casting a long moon shadow on the rippling surface. The first thing they did was stumble to the edge of the pool where they knelt and drank and drank the cool water. Then, faces dripping, they filled their water flasks.

When they got up from the pool refreshed and satisfied, a woman was waiting for them. “Hello! My name is Priscilla. Come and join us.” She led them to a fire-ring where three families were assembling, six adults and four children. Walker and Sophia made twelve. The two older children were carefully stacking stones into a fire-ring in the center of the circle. When it was done, Walker watched everyone there take a box out of their bag and tip it into the dark fire-ring so that a glowing thing fell into it.

Priscilla turned toward them. “Have you found your ember box in your haversack yet?” They shook their heads and reached into their bags. Into Walker’s hands came a warm metal box and when he opened it he saw a live coal.

Priscilla said, “Tip it into the ring. You’ll pull it out later.” They did. The pile of embers glowed vividly and then flame danced above them. The oldest man fed it with dry wood. The light made all their faces shine.

“Hi everyone!” Priscilla got their attention. “This is Sophia and this is Walker.”

Priscilla introduced her husband, Timothy.

“How do you do,” he said.

“Our children are the Josiah, 15 and Betsy, who is 8.”

“Hi,” they said with a wave.

“My sister Jenny is over there, and her husband is Arthur. They children are Abigail, who is 14 and Reed who is 9.” They smiled and waved.

And here is Grandpa,” she said, sliding her arm around his waist. “Our father. And our mother is called Grandma by everyone.”

“Tell us who you are. How do you find yourselves in the desert? What is your story?”

Sophia told them, beginning at their meeting, telling of their trial at the wildflower way and the fall she took coming down the rocky mountain trail. “If I hadn’t gotten hurt, we would have been here long before dark and found the water we needed to get to the next shelter.”

“Well, now. That’s something. We were also delayed. The cook wagon broke down a few miles back and we had to stop to fix it. It appears it delayed us just enough for us to make camp and gather with you! I believe our King wanted us to meet.”

Sophia looked at Walker. “It was a good thing I got hurt!!” She giggled.

But Walker mumbled to Priscilla, “I felt like the King didn’t answer my prayer or that He didn’t care.”

She replied quietly, “He heard. His answer was, ‘Trust me.’”

From the cookfire near the chuckwagon the scent of cooking meat and potatoes wafted over and made Walker’s stomach growl. Soon Priscilla and Timothy passed out to each a heaping plate of hot food. They dug in. Walker thought it was the best meal he had ever had.

As they ate, the company told stories of their travels on the King’s Way, one after another. Betsy said, “Yesterday a butterfly landed on my arm and stayed there for hours. She was very pretty.”

Josiah, who had helped stack stones, said, “One night we saw shooting stars. The sky was full of them. I was in awe.”

Arthur said, “We missed a flash flood by minutes. Just after we got out of a dry river bed a powerful flood roared down from the mountain that had just had a heavy rain. The King be praised.”

Story after story bubbled up like fountains from the grateful company. Walker felt like his heart had been dry but now was refreshed with the flow of stories about the lovingkindness and faithfulness of the King. It was like living water running through the assembly. Something tickled his mind but he brushed it aside and listened to the talk around the fire.

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Walker Tale #9 The Long Trail Down

As soon as Walker and Sophia entered the narrow rocky trail they knew they were in trouble. The path went steeply down. Huge boulders in the way forced them to go around. Loose stones from the cliff littered the path so that they were in danger of sliding. After an hour they were breathing hard and their legs were burning from the effort.

The red sun cast long shadows as it set. They knew they had to stop for the night. They spotted a shelter in the gloom of dusk and, sure enough, a heart-shaped rock hid the key for the front door. It was more rustic than the other—no beds, no bread and cheese, no dishes. It did have sleeping bags, though, and a wooden box held beef jerky and dried fruit. A clear brook ran close by and the water refreshed them. They slept on the floor.

The next morning there were up and out the door into a clear sky. They drank from the stream and refilled their flasks. It was hot already.

For hours they went down, down, down the mountain. They often had to stop to rest their sore legs and catch their breath. At midday, when Sophia was beyond the next turn ahead of him, Walker drew out his kayline and spoke softly into it.

“King, this trail is so hard. Surely we have lost our way? Did we miss a turn? Are we still on the King’s highway?”

In that moment he caught a glimpse of blue and when he turned to look more closely, he saw the three blue strips of the King’s Way. That felt like an answer so he pressed on. “Can you send us on a path that’s not so hard?”

The kayline was silent.

Walker caught up with Sophia. She had climbed up on a high rock so she could sit in shade under a stunted tree.  “I’m taking a water break,” she said. “It’s so hot! Do you think we’re lost?”

“No,” he grunted. “We just passed the blue stripes. This is the Way.” He sat beside her and slumped back on the trunk.

“This is so hard!” she said softly. She wiped at her eyes.

They sat until their breathing slowed. Then he said, “I remember what I read in The Letters this morning. It said, ‘Give thanks in all things.’”

“Huh,” said Sophia, startled. “That’s…interesting.”

Walker closed his eyes and said, “Well, uh, thank You, King, that we had shelter last night, water for our bottles that got us this far, and…and for this shade.” He opened his eyes.

Sophia said with a hint of a whine, “My legs are getting wobbly with all this downhill walking. I hope we reach the valley soon.”

From their perch they could see far in the distance. Their trail would eventually take them off the mountain into a flatland of red sand, red canyons, and huge red rock formations. They saw no trees. The sun glared without relief.

It was time to get going. As they hopped off the rock, Sophia landed badly. She fell hard, face first, scraping her hands so that they stung. Walker was dismayed when he saw that they were bleeding. But then, when she tried to stand, pain shot up from her ankle. She sat down with a cry.

Walker got down and gently moved her foot and they decided it wasn’t broken, just sprained. But she couldn’t stand by herself.

Sophia told him now, “I read something like that. I read, ‘Give thanks for all things’. So here goes. ‘Thank you, King, for this twisted ankle!’” They laughed a little at that. How could it be a good thing that she was hurt?

They walked side by side now, Walker helping with his arm around her.

As the day went drearily on they grew terribly thirsty. They were almost out of water, so they just wet their mouths with drops from their bottles.

At long last they came to level ground. They drank the last swallow of warm water as the sun dropped below the horizon. They stumbled on for a while in the dusk looking for a stream but didn’t see any sign of water. Tired and hungry, they sagged to the ground.

“Bag,” panted Sophia. “Water in the King’s bag.” Walker had already tried, but he reached in anyway. Nothing. No water flask came to him or to Sophia.

“King!” wailed Walker. “Why aren’t you giving us water?!”

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Walker Tale #8 Trial

When Walker and Sophia woke the next morning, they found Wiley had already left, taking a portion of the bread and cheese for his journey. They finished off the bread and cheese and tidied up.

They each took time to read something in The Letters. Walker read, “No temptation has overtaken you but such as is common to man, and God is faithful who will not allow you to be tempted beyond what you are able, but with the temptation will provide the way of escape also, that you may be able to endure it.”

Walker and Sophia picked up their bags and left the shelter, laying the matches near the lantern, locking the door, and placing the key under the heart-shaped rock.

Later in the morning they met a shepherd moving his flock across the lane. His sheep looked contented and well-fed. He smiled kindly at them. “Hello, travelers! Where are you headed?”

“We’re going to King’s Court,” said Walker, sensing his trustworthiness.

“I know that way well. You are headed in the right direction. But it gets tricky. Don’t take a wrong turn. Look for the blue paint marks of the King’s highway.”

They thanked him and continued. They entered a forest that kept them cool most of the day. In late afternoon they emerged to an extraordinary sight. On their right was a wide field full of wildflowers, their colorful blossoms nodding in a gentle breeze. In the field, faint trails with bent flowers told them many others had walked freely through. On their left loomed a rock wall. Ahead, the road narrowed to a path winding around fallen boulders. Walker saw lines of blue paint on the farthest. Three solitary black locust trees grew along the field. They stopped in the shade of the first and admired the view.

Sophia said, “The flowers are so beautiful! All the colors of the rainbow. Let’s go that way.”

A cheerful voice called from above them in the black locust, “Welcome to Wildflower Way!” Something whizzed by Walker’s face and landed in the grass. He instinctively drew his sword. He looked down at an acorn and up into the grinning face of a cheeky squirrel looking down at him through the leaves. The squirrel playfully lobbed another acorn at Walker, who dodged.

Walker grinned. “Hello Mr. Squirrel! It is beautiful, but our path is over there.” He pointed to the rock marked with blue and Sophia now saw it for the first time. “Stick with the narrow path. Wide is the way that leads to destruction,” he said quietly to himself, swinging his sword. Reluctantly they continued down the road.

Under the second tree they each felt an acorn smack on their heads. “Ouch! That stung!” grumbled Sophia. They looked up at an unsmiling squirrel. “The King says to go this way,” he said, gesturing toward the open field.

Walker’s kayline stayed cool but he remembered and recited out loud, “I will instruct you in the way you should go; I will counsel you with my eye upon you.” “No thanks, Mr. Squirrel,” he said firmly. Sophia looked a little scared and stepped closer to Walker.

Before they had made it to the shade of the third tree they were greeted with a storm of acorns. They hurt! A furious squirrel jeered at them as he and a scurry of squirrels threw acorns like darts. “You are King’s people? You won’t walk through our field? Why do you hate us? Take that, and that, and that!”

Walker stood a moment stunned at the unexpected hostility of squirrels, but then remembered his haversack. “Sophia! The King’s bag!” He tossed his sword into his left hand and reached in with his right and something filled his palm. He grasped and pulled out a shield and held it between his head and the fierce bombardment. Up went his sword, too, and he shouted, “You, O King, are a shield about me, my glory and the lifter of my head!” He held his head up as confidence surged in him. Their shields deflected acorns, tink-tink tink.

“Come on!” shouted Walker. They ran beyond the trees and entered the rocky track.

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Walker Tale #7 Counterfeit

While Walker cut bread and cheese for supper and Sophia spent her free time sketching, Wiley saw his chance and reached into Walker’s haversack. Sophia caught his movement behind her in the mirror and turned quickly with a shout, “Hey! What you are doing?”

Wiley stopped abruptly and said defensively, “I was just standing it up. It fell over.”

Sophia retorted, “Your hand is in the bag.” He hastily pulled it out.

Walker came over. Wiley wouldn’t look at him.

“Hey, Wiley,” said Walker. “Were you in my bag?”

“Not really.”

“Were you going to take something?”

“No,” said Wiley. “Just looking.”

“We all have the same things in our bags,” said Sophia. “Why do you need to see what is in Walker’s?”

“I just want to know what you carry in these bags,” he said.

Walker and Sophia were stunned and they turned to look at each other, “Wait—” said Walker, “Don’t you have a bag of your own?”

“Here’s what I’ve got,” said Wiley, picking up his bag from the bunk and holding it out.

They stared at it and then Walker said, “That doesn’t look like the bag the shepherd gave me.”

“It isn’t the good workmanship of the Lord’s leather-workers,” agreed Sophia. “Where did you get it?”

“A shepherd named Mr. Lupus sold it to me. He said it would do everything a King’s Bag would, guaranteed. After he left I looked in mine and it just had some blocks of wood and a handful of hay.”

“To be honest,” said Sophia, “I don’t know what is in mine. It seems to keep on giving.”

“I’ll show you what is in mine,” Walker offered. He picked it up, flipped back the flap and tried to dump it out on the bed, but nothing dropped. He reached in to the narrow opening and pulled out what came to hand. First came his copy of The Letters and then his short sword. But try as he might he could grasp nothing else. He could feel there was more but his hands remained empty. When he peered inside he could see nothing.

“I guess I can’t,” he said reluctantly as he lowered it. “I carry The Letters in my bag but the sword was a gift that came out of it.”

Wiley sneered. “I don’t see a sword. Look, all you King’s travelers carry those bags but they are useless. ‘The King gives us what we need,’ you all say. But there’s nothing there that you didn’t put in it.”

“You don’t see the sword? But look what else I got from it,” Walker exclaimed. He pulled up his shirt to show the kayline. Wiley stared at him, looking from his chest to his face. “What?” he said finally. “I don’t see anything.”

Sophia and Walker looked at one another in dismay. “I can see your sword and kayline, but he can’t,” she said at last.

Wiley stood up and said gruffly, “I’m hungry. Let’s eat.” They sat at the table and ate the fresh bread and cheese Walker had found in the pantry. The cold butter he had taken from the springhouse had softened in the heat enough to spread on the bread and with raspberry jam it made a sweet end to the meal. But in the cold silence it turned bitter in their bellies.

Wiley cleared off the table and the others washed and put away the dishes. Wiley curled up on his sleeping bag, his face to the wall. The storm had moved on and stars were visible in the dark sky. Sophia and Walker felt an urge to step outside and together they looked up at the starfields. Sophia began to softly sing a hymn.

The heavens declare the glory of God; 
The skies proclaim the work of His hands
Through the night, through the day, they silently say,
“He is King and great are His ways.”

He made it all and He made it for us—
The sun, the moon, the seas and the lands,
He is vast, we are small; all is His, He is all.  
He is King and great are His ways.

Sophia sings a simple song while looking at a night sky full of stars.

[This is me trying to sing like an eight-year-old. Extracted from the live recording when I delivered the story in church on July 23, 2023.]

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Walker Tale #6 The Companions Take Shelter from a Storm

Late that afternoon as Walker and his two companions, Sophia and Wiley, continued on the King’s highway, the sky grew dark and thunder growled in the distance. Sophia watched anxiously along the road for traveler shelters and found one just in time, for the hard rain was coming up the valley. “Come on! Up there!” she said.

The companions find shelter just in time.

They ran up the path and stood under the porch roof while Sophia paused in the rain to look under a rock. She unlocked the door, and they charged in, laughing in relief. Lightning flashed and thunder cracked.

“Oh!” said Sophia, shaking off water. “I am so glad the King had his servants build these cabins. I’ve needed them a few times, when I got caught by night or bad weather.”

“Nobody minds if we stay here?” asked Walker, who was new to the Way. He put down his haversack and looked around.

“The King provides, “ she said, as sat on a bunk bed. She took off her shoes and socks and wiggled her toes. “He placed these shelters along the way. He is so good to us.”

Wiley grunted and plopped down on the other bunk. “This one’s not bad. But that’s not how it happened with me. The last one I stayed at was a waste.”

Sophia looked at him, incredulous. “What? How can that be?!”

“Tell us what happened,” said Walker, sitting in the rocking chair.

“Okay, well. I’m walking along this road and it’s getting dark, see? I can barely see the road. But I see one of these houses. I go up and knock on the door. No answer. No light, either. The door didn’t budge when I tried it. I went around back and saw a  stone firepit. There wasn’t any wood, so I looked around for branches I could burn, but it was too dark to see. I had a few crackers with me so I ate those. I lay down in the grass but didn’t sleep much. I was cold and there were things rustling in the grass. I was glad to get out of there the next morning. I didn’t think it was so great.”

Sophia stared at him. “But didn’t you find a list of instructions about the shelters in your bag? Didn’t someone at least tell you about them?”

“Well, some guy told me a bunch of stuff I had to do if I ever needed one but I figured I didn’t need “instructions”. I don’t need a bunch of rules. I live my way,” said Wiley.

Walker turned to Sophia, “Did you ever find one in the dark?”

Sophia said, “Yes. I pulled the instructions out of the King’s bag and it told me I would find the key under a rock that looks like a heart. I opened the door and went in. Next, I was supposed to find a full oil lamp three steps forward and one step to the left, and matches behind it. They were there and I lit the lamp. Then I was able to see the skinny wood door in the wall for the food pantry, where I got what I needed for supper. In a wooden trunk under the window were sleeping bags rolled up and I took one for the bunk. Across from the beds was a woodstove and alongside it was a box full of firewood and kindling. I had everything I needed.”

Walker stood up and looked around. He lit the lamp. He took wood and kindling and got a merry fire going so their damp clothes could dry. He found the well-stocked pantry and made supper for the three of them. Sophia rolled out the sleeping bags, and then, assured that Walker had supper under his control, she pulled out her sketchbook and sat before a mirror to draw a self-portrait. Wiley watched them and when he saw no one was watching him, he reached for Walker’s haversack.

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Walker Tale #5 Walker Meets Two Travelers

When Walker woke on the second day of his unexpected journey, he remembered the counsel of the shepherd, “Read from the King’s letter every morning.” Since it was the King’s letter that had given him a new life and had comforted him over what he had done, he was eager to read. He flipped to his bookmark and this is what he read:

“My dear brothers, take note of this: everyone should be quick to listen, slow to speak, and slow to become angry.”

Walker thought, I did listen to the people here in town. I’ll do what they told me to do. I’m taking the message to the King’s court so a Hero will go on the quest and bring embers to Cold River.

Betty greeted him with a smile when he came down to the kitchen. “Good morning, Walker! You’ll eat a hearty breakfast and then be on your way. I’ve packed a lunch.”

“Thank you!” he said. And after he had eaten, he packed up and went to the door. Betty had sketched out a map to the King’s Court. He thanked her and started down the road, and waving one last time as the house disappeared from view. As he walked he recited the riddle a few times:

Seek the flaming embers where
the living waters run;
a house of stone remembers there
the death of the living one.

Late in the morning he saw a girl coming down a mountain path and waited for her. She looked to be about eight years old, with dark hair and brown eyes, and carried a bag on her side like his.

“I’m Walker.”

“I’m Sophia. Let’s walk together. Where are you going?”

“I’m going to the King with a message for a Hero.”

“You’re bringing a message to the King’s Hero? Wow! Can you tell me what it is?”

“Sure!” he said. “It’s a riddle.” He recited it.

“Oh! I’m good at riddles! Have you figured it out? No? Let’s see if we can guess it. That ‘living water’, could that be—”

“No, no,” interrupted Walker, annoyed. “I’m not supposed to solve it.”

“Yes, but, if we have an idea what it is then we can watch for it and…”

“No! no, no, no!” said Walker, more upset now. “It’s for the Hero! It’s not for us.”

“But, you should learn what it means because we might see it on the way!”

But Walker had put his fingers in his ears and sang rudely, “La la la la la la,” so she gave up and fell into stubborn silence.

After he noticed she wasn’t talking, he said angrily, “You’re too bossy! Don’t tell me what to do. I’m only a messenger. It’s not my job to figure out the riddle—it is the Hero’s.”

“Okay, fine,” she said. “You don’t want help. I won’t bother you. Hmmph.”

“Hmmph,” said Walker.

She slowed down so he could get ahead and they walked on that way, single file, twenty feet between them. When they stopped for lunch they sat apart and ate alone.

An hour later, still walking alone together, they came to a crossroad, and slumped on a boulder was a boy who looked to be about twelve. His clothes looked old and shabby and he scowled as they came up to him. After they all introduced themselves, he said, “I don’t suppose you know the way to—”

“—to the King’s Court?” interrupted Walker. “That’s where we’re going!”

The boy, whose name was Wiley, gave them a thoughtful look and nodded.

“We could all go together,” suggested Walker happily and he turned away to pick up his bag. But Sophia watched Wiley’s face and felt the hairs on the back of her neck stand up.

“Yeah, sure,” said Wiley as he got to his feet. “I’ll go with you.”

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Walker Tale #4 Who Will Go for the King’s Hero?

Walker slipped quickly through the narrow opening in the town gates and they closed behind with him a solid thud. Before him lay the open town square. He saw a large group of townsfolk standing together around a tall man wearing the red coat of the town mayor. Walker was hungry after his long hike but the shops were closed. No one took any notice of him. The people, who looked anxious and fearful, were in a meeting.

The glovemaker said, “We’ve been able to keep them out for a few days but eventually the Grey Wolf’s agents get in. His slaves are sneaky. How can we keep them away?”

The lampmaker said, “Sacred fire would protect us but our fires have gone out. We need the fire!”

The watchman reported, “Our walls and doors were strong enough but yesterday his vultures flew overhead, checking out our defenses. I think they are planning to get in.”

Someone cried, “If only we had a messenger we could get word to the King to send a King’s Hero from his court!”

The people shouted, “Yes, a King’s Hero! Yes, send a messenger! We need a messenger!”

The school teacher said, “Whom should we send? Who would go?”

Walker felt his kayline warm on his heart. He felt the message, You go. I will go with you.

So he stood up and said, “Here I am. Send me.”

The townspeople all turned to stare at him.

Finally, the tall man with the red coat said, “The road is too dangerous for a child. What weapons do you carry?”

The kayline warmed his heart again and Walker felt the message, Take what you find in your bag. While everyone watched, he reached into his haversack and felt a cool metal handle fit into his palm. He pulled it out and saw it was a small sword. With a sudden swoop he lifted it above his head and cried, “The Word of the King, lively and active!”

The people stepped back. The candlemaker said in awe, “He has a sword? All of ours have rusted and crumbled to dust.”

“What is the message I must bring the King’s Hero?” said Walker.

“Tell him the town of Cold River needs the sacred fire,” said the mayor.

“Where do I need to go to find him?” Walker asked as he tucked the sword away again in the bag.

The mayor answered with a tone that implied Walker was an idiot not to know, “Go to the King’s Court. All the King’s Heroes dwell there. The King makes Heroes only of the best and most deserving. He trains them there and sends them out when there is hero work to be done.”

“I don’t know the way,” said Walker.

The mayor waved vaguely toward the north.

A third time the kayline warmed and spoke to his heart, I will instruct you and teach you in the way you should go. I will counsel you with My eye upon you.

An old woman in a baker’s apron stepped forward. “You need to know the riddle, young man; You need the riddle!” Several of the school children rolled their eyes. “It’s old Betty and her silly riddle!” they said scornfully. But the mayor shushed them and let her speak.

She said, “My grandfather taught it to me for such a time as this. You tell it to the Hero so he will know where to collect the fire.”

She recited,

“Seek the flaming embers where
The living waters run;
A house of stone remembers there
The Death of the Living One.”

She had Walker say it back to her three times to make sure he knew it, while the people looked on silently. At last she nodded. “You have it, boy. That’s settled,” she said brightly. “Come have supper with me and sleep in my house tonight before you go.”

“Gladly,” said Walker. “And I’ll leave first thing in the morning to seek the King’s Hero at the King’s court.”

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Walker Tale #3 The Shepherd Fights a Wolf

Just as the shepherd was about to show Walker what was in his haversack, they heard frantic bleating in the pasture and they quickly turned. The sheep were running about in fear as a large grey wolf pushed a lamb to the ground. The wolf grabbed the lamb and started to run to the woods.

Westminster sprinted toward the wolf and as he did he reached into his shirt for something and shouted into it, “King, save!” The wolf looked over its shoulder, slowing it down long enough for Westminster to slam into it. The lamb dropped from its mouth and ran to its mother while Westminster and the wolf wrestled with shouts and snarls. Westminster cried out in pain as the wolf bit down hard on his arm. With his other hand the shepherd smacked a blow to its head and the wolf yelped like a puppy and let go. It slunk off toward the forest.

Meanwhile, Walker who had been standing frozen to the spot, came out of his stupor and ran forward yelling, “Go home! Go home, you…you ugly dog!” He stopped by Westminster, who was bleeding. “Take me to my bag,” gasped Westminster.

When Walker opened the bag he found a sack with two bottles. Westminster said, “First we’ll wash out the wound with the wine, that one. That’ll clean it. Oof! That stung.” Walker pulled the stopper on the second flask and drizzled olive oil on the punctures. The shepherd said, “Ah, that feels better. Bandage me up, would you please?”

It took Walker three times but he finally got the cloth wrapped snugly around the shepherd’s hand. Finally, they sat back. The sheep grazed close by.

Walker said, “It sure was lucky that wolf was afraid of you.”

“Lucky? Walker, a wolf is not afraid of me. It was the King’s power that scared him. Did you hear me call on the king?”

“I heard you say ‘King, save!’ into something. What is that hanging around your neck?

“That is my kayline. Its full name is Prosookay but we call it kayline because it is a direct line to the king. You have one, too. Reach into your haversack and feel for the cord. Pull that out.”

Walker pulled the cord out of his bag and held the Prosookay in his palm.

Walker holds his own K-line.

Westminster said, “Put it to your ear.” Walker did. He said, “It sounds like someone’s listening!”

 The shepherd smiled. “That’s right. This is how you have conversations with the king. Don’t lose it!”

“Now, it’s time you took off that old shirt and put on a new one. It’s there, in your bag. Go on! Fish it out and put it on.” It was linen, white and cool. Walker felt clean and fresh in it. He hung the kayline around his neck and it rested on his heart with a gentle weight.

“The kayline is not only for help in times of trouble. It is a line to the king. Talk to him all along the way,” said the shepherd, sitting up and scanning the fields alertly.

“What else is in this bag!?” asked Walker.

“Your haversack will supply what you need when you need it. The king supplies. Now, it is time for you to get back on the road. Keep to the king’s highway always, read the king’s letter daily, and talk to the king often.”

They shook hands and then Walker climbed the stonewall back to the road. He waved and began to walk. He walked for hours. Just as the day was cooling and he thought about stopping for the evening he saw the red roofs of a town down in the valley. Before long he stood before the town gate, closed doors of thick oak. He pulled the bellrope to be let in. A small window in the wall opened and the white-haired gatekeeper said urgently, “I’m going to open the door and you get yourself in here, quick!”

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Embarrassing

Wow, young me had no idea what she was doing.

A week ago I posted Walker Tale #2 and that younger me published before thinking it through. Now that I am oh-so-much older I’m thinking I do not know the first thing about serious writing!

I have been working on my story arc and thought I had it worked out. Boy goes on journey, has lots of episodes that each connect to a truth, and ultimately discovers…well, wait to see what. I present these every two weeks, so I have plenty of time to work out the next story and maybe even get ahead. I can do this, I thought.

So, the first thing that ran my train off the rails was reading a book on the craft of storytelling, Saves the Cat! Writes a Novel. (That’s meant to be read as “The screenwriting concept marketed as ‘Save the Cat!'” –referring to the need to create sympathy for a flawed main character by having him rescue a cat early in the story– “now turns its attention to writing a novel.” Make sense? Took me a while.) The book makes a case for hitting the essential ’15 beats’ of a compelling story. I learned a lot. I tried to apply it to the Walker Tales, and have spent more than a week falling over my feet and getting pretty depressed about my prospects as a writer.

But then I wondered, Does this story arc apply to children’s stories? If I have a long “bad guys are closing in” in the second half of Act II, am I going to alarm my young audience and their mothers? (The fathers might really like fight scenes with a gruesome enemy.) Keep in mind I present a new chapter every other week and end on a cliffhanger. I can just imagine disturbing the sleep of my innocent charges.

So, I pulled some picture books from my Grandma shelf and noticed that at least three beats were missing. The build-up of tension is not the same and the tone is lighter. So, I am going to archive the ’15 beats’ format, which I do admire, for another writing project. After all, this Tales of Walker project was my idea of a series of simple writing assignments that would help me learn the questions of writing so I will eventually be ready to hear some solutions in future writing classes. Oh, and serve the families of the church as well.

The second thing that broke down my train was the way I presented the gospel in Walker #2. It was embarrassingly sloppy. I have stewed over it for days and finally rewrote it. [I have replaced the post with the new version.] There is no way I am going to send Walker on his journey without a clear understanding that the King, Christ, died for his sins–they are that bad and He is that holy. The “Westminster Confession” of this scene needed to be trimmed to the max because this story is meant to show and not tell. I needed to show how the gospel looks in this world and that meant a certain amount of telling.

Well. Today I have made changes, printed out my copy and re-posted it here, and I am moving on. I still need to sketch an illustration and play with watercolors. If only I knew an illustrator with a sense of humor in her lines. If only I had sent one of the kids to art school for illustration… Oh, wait.

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